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 EBI: Sentences are too long and proof read to make sure they make sense.
WWW: Good use of terminology and good understanding.

Exemplar 5...


EBI: Be more specific when talking about lighting and make sure denotation is used correctly
WWW: Good detail and analysis of the image.

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